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We seem the same. One day, you may know this.
In all the classes we converge within
Through the same paths we walk down the similar halls
And in that we buy the same brand of mechanical pencil
We have lived in the same neighborhood
Watched the same plays unfold on the stage of the world
For the same fifteen years
How when you walk, you swing your arms just as I do
Your mother drives a blue van, just like mine
I’ve seen you tie your shoes and you still do bunny-ears, like me
And you friends point this out with laughter in their voices, as did mine
We’ve done the same assignments for the same teachers
Had problems with the very same Chemistry equations
But we are quite different. This I have come to know.
When you smile, others smile on cue
When you speak, they turn their ears towards you
When you reach, hands spring out like weeds in clean, dark soil and reach back
When you walk, they follow
When you want, they will provide
I do not know why this is. Neither of us have the answer.
There is a long hallway in our school that we both walk every day.
Yesterday, they were empty as students sat at their respective positions
Soaking and scorning the knowledge presented so readily to them.
I was passing through this long hallway, empty and vast
Save for you
Approaching steadily from the other end.
Our footsteps played off each other
Matching tempos on the offbeats
As we came closer
There was a measure of tension, as I worried as to my obligations
In such a meeting, but I supposed the standard smile would suffice.
But as we came close
Met
Passed
You would not meet my face with your eyes,
Refused to see me.
One day, we may realize that we both know why.
In all the classes we converge within
Through the same paths we walk down the similar halls
And in that we buy the same brand of mechanical pencil
We have lived in the same neighborhood
Watched the same plays unfold on the stage of the world
For the same fifteen years
How when you walk, you swing your arms just as I do
Your mother drives a blue van, just like mine
I’ve seen you tie your shoes and you still do bunny-ears, like me
And you friends point this out with laughter in their voices, as did mine
We’ve done the same assignments for the same teachers
Had problems with the very same Chemistry equations
But we are quite different. This I have come to know.
When you smile, others smile on cue
When you speak, they turn their ears towards you
When you reach, hands spring out like weeds in clean, dark soil and reach back
When you walk, they follow
When you want, they will provide
I do not know why this is. Neither of us have the answer.
There is a long hallway in our school that we both walk every day.
Yesterday, they were empty as students sat at their respective positions
Soaking and scorning the knowledge presented so readily to them.
I was passing through this long hallway, empty and vast
Save for you
Approaching steadily from the other end.
Our footsteps played off each other
Matching tempos on the offbeats
As we came closer
There was a measure of tension, as I worried as to my obligations
In such a meeting, but I supposed the standard smile would suffice.
But as we came close
Met
Passed
You would not meet my face with your eyes,
Refused to see me.
One day, we may realize that we both know why.
Literature
No-one forgets a good teacher
"Listen to me or I'll break your legs"
- Steve Thompson
Dear Sir. Not sir. It's automatic.
Sorry Steve. Dear Steve. I'm fed
On seven years of autocratic
Tiffinisms: "genuflect
to teachers." Seven years' emphatic
Faire-sans-dire still in my head.
Dear Steve. Your style was more dramatic
you taught life and art instead:
Stoppard, condoms, mathematics,
goatee beards and Berthold Brecht
and Bigmouth Strikes Again, such is
what you gave us, plus the threat
of a half a term on crutches
for ignoring you. Dear Steve - respect.
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Raskol
Our son and his wife sleep in separate rooms. They are painted the same colour and bear identical scars but are separated by a hall so long that by the time I walk from one end to the other, I am too tired to compare and know what is different.
That is the convenience of an oversized house, I think, that we did not have in our small one-room apartmentthey never have to see each others faces. You remember the nights when we were given no choice but to lie next to each other, against the hard corner, when we were seething in each others anger. How wonderful it might have been to stare at a blank wall, letting the heat of our
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Manuscript
I have written us down, typed us up, and sent us out.
they will edit us, and say some parts are no good.
but I want your run-ons, your lack of punctuation; and you are so easy
on my weak binding, my damaged spine.
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Written about no one in particular. Just the general state of things, and my position as one in the discontent masses. As is life. I'm beginning to realize that I really wouldn't have it any other way.
© 2007 - 2024 MsCellanea
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This is really, really good, Mel. I know exactly what you're talking about here, and love that you created some fictional person just close enough to you to be completely different.
Interesting style, too. Have you read any prose poems? Because this is really, really close. Mary Oliver's "Yes! No!" is a good example, if you're looking.
Interesting style, too. Have you read any prose poems? Because this is really, really close. Mary Oliver's "Yes! No!" is a good example, if you're looking.